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Guidelines

I'm looking for the following type of feedback:

Plot

• What do you think of the pacing?
• Are the beats believable?
• Is the plot compelling?
• Does it keep your attention?
• Do you have suggestions on how to change it?

Structure

• How do you feel about the structure of the script?
• Did you get lost in the events or was the unfolding/sequence of events clear?
• Did you have specific suggestions on how to make the structure clearer?

Characters

• Can you relate to the struggles the Protagonists faced?
• Did you root for the protagonists?
• Did you understand and empathize with protagonists' motivation?
• Did you hate the villain?
• Did you understand the villain's motivation? Did you find them convincing?
• What did you think of the growth arc the characters went through?
• Did the character ever act in unexpected ways?

Dialogue

• Does each character have his/her own voice? Or do all characters sound the same?
• Are there any suggestions on how to improve the dialogue to make it more personal/compelling?

Theme

• Was the theme communicated clearly in the script?
• Did you relate to the main theme of the story?